Op Ed Edits

Amanda Rickert
1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
Yes, that healthcare is not what's right for the country

2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
Yes, it provides an alternative plan for reform

3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
Yes in the opening it talks about what change people wanted

4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
Yes

5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
Yes

6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
Yes

7. Is the writing clear?
Yes